I’m not going to repeat all of the commentary about the “elevator speech” you need to have ready to give to anyone who asks what you do. We all have experienced the need to have the “speech” ready and many of us have one at the ready. But are we really ready?
I recently wrote out my “speech” and also looked at number of law firm web sites to see their “speech”. My conclusion is that we need to take pity on the people who actually have to listen to our speeches.
Let me offer some examples of what I might say and how a prospect might react. “I am a litigator.” Most people don’t really know what a litigator is or does. But clients know that “litigator” is a term that is so vanilla as to be meaningless. Of the millions who would describe themselves as a litigator, how am I different? Well, unlike many litigators, I actually try cases. So then I try to distinguish myself from the many litigators who never venture into court by saying “I am a trial lawyer.” Will my prospect think I am one of those people who contribute heavily to the Democratic party? Positing yourself as an adversary at worst or someone who can’t help at best is not a good way to go. I try qualifying my speech by saying “I’m a business trial lawyer.” Okay, so you work for businesses. But is trial skill the key attribute the prospect is looking for? Since 97% of all cases settle, it sounds as if I am really suggesting I only deal with 3% of the prospect's problems? I know I can contribute something of value on the other 97% though. I am an effective negotiator, a good legal strategist able to secure dismissals on motion, and so on. Plus, I know that clients don't always view trials with the same warmth I do. The business trial lawyer description doesn’t communicate the right message either.
What do others say? I saw a small firm’s web site (under 20 lawyers) describe their expertise as including Tax Law, International Trade and Transactions, Corporate Planning and Transactions , Intellectual Property (patents, trademarks, copyrights, trade secrets and licensing), Media and Communications Law, Litigation, Employment Law, Environmental Law, and Legislative Affairs. How can a firm with less than 20 lawyers have the depth of expertise needed to practice in all these areas? There are lawyers that do each of these things every day and are true specialists. Putting aside the veracity of the claims, will they sound true? Should I try a longer speech putting in a description of more things I can do, more types of lawsuits that I have handled? I have concluded that the risk of sounding like I am overselling is not worth it.
Another firm claims to be devoted to “working in their client interests.” Well, that hardly sounds like a distinguishing factor. Another claims to deliver value. I have to confess that I haven’t seen a firm admit that it fails to deliver value. I don’t mean to be trite, but the use of buzzwords doesn’t really make the “speech” effective. But the notion of somehow communicating a client service orientation does make sense. I just think it needs to be more subtle.
Back to my “litigator.” Litigation is, at its core, just a means of resolving a dispute. So what I really am is a “problem solver.” I'm effective at it, and I am efficient. I work at solving problems for businesses rather than for accused criminals, or people injured at work, for example. What other traits do I bring to the table as a problem solver? My best trait, in my judgment at least, is my creativity. So, “I creatively, effectively and efficiently solve problems for businesses.” But there’s more. We are pushing alternative fees so we can help in-house counsel with their budgets and avoid the headaches associated with the hourly rate. Now I’m trying this: “I creatively, effectively and efficiently solve problems for businesses in a way that cures headaches for in-house counsel.” And to tell them about my firm, I can add: “I work in a firm of like-skilled people.”
My speech seems to describe what I do generally enough and in a different enough way that a prospect hearing it might ask a follow up question, starting the dialogue I was hoping for. Am I being too generous when I listen to my own speech? Are my ears too dulled by listening to my own music? What do you think?
Even if you think I am full of [fill in the blank] about my own speech, hopefully this post may cause you to listen critically to your own.
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